I have had a look at this feed a while back. It is pretty poor IMHO and I wouldn’t recommend it, if they included the suggested changes it would be even worse. One of the worst things is that it just arbitrarily blocks random chunks of Microsoft services (including ones you may have whitelisted) by blocking some of the intermediate CNAME domains (like a-msedge.net) Not to mention that some of them are not tracking servers but provide other services (like the weather for the live tile.)
Quite a lot of the lists blocking Microsoft tracking are similarly bad, I have to assume that they don’t test very well if at all. Recently I’ve had to pull the Phishtank feed (supposedly a list of phishing domains), the last straw was when they added login.live.com (which is quite a useful one if you actually use pretty much any Microsoft services at all!)
I’m not bad at tracking down the DNS responses to find the issues but for a relative novice to find a whitelisted domain suddenly blocked and showing as whitelisted in pfB it would be infuriating.
I have always been hesitant to recommend these types of Feeds… So unless there is more feedback, I will just hold until more people chime in....